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Monday 20 February 2012

The Body Builder - 55 Fiction


"DON'T LET ANYTHING, EVEN DEATH STOP YOU FROM DOING WHAT YOU LIKE."
His father had said that.
Body building was Jack's passion. It was like breathing for him. He picked up his usual weights and started to exercise. He looked at the crashed smith machine and that fateful event that had cost him his life."
 

You can curse me for wasting your time if you want. :P
This was my first attempt at 55 words fiction.
In fact it was just a thought that occurred when I was as usual sitting idle and pretending to exercise at gym today morning. A well built guy walked in and was exercising in front. Looking at him and his passion for body building I couldn't help but think of this weird story about how nothing, even death can stop him from pursuing his passion. :P
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16 comments:

  1. AJEYA RAO20 February 2012 at 10:09

    Nice story. Interesting concept of 55 words. rolls imagination

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  2. Deepak Karthik20 February 2012 at 11:39

    Awesome buddy :)
    really a rocking theme !
    keep going

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  3. Arun Kumar20 February 2012 at 12:25

    A innovative and a interesting short fiction story. Keep up your good work Vinay.

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    1. vinay20 February 2012 at 14:56

      Thank you, Arun. :) :)

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    2. Abhyudaya21 February 2012 at 09:39

      It was an ok story, with your skills, you can do better. :-) I mean bodybuilding? Seriously?

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    3. vinay21 February 2012 at 10:50

      Thanks for saying that, Abhyudaya Shrivastava. I hope next time the story would be mature and better for you.
      you can check out my other ones too and give review about it.

      http://insanemoviegeek.blogspot.in/search/label/short%20stories

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  4. Hariharan Valady22 February 2012 at 19:12

    Interesting story in just 55 words. Wonder how you could manage this!

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    1. vinay22 February 2012 at 19:21

      Thank you, Sir. I am glad you liked it, it means a lot to me. :) :)

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  5. Sujatha Sathya22 February 2012 at 22:02

    55 words and a story. hmmm quite a novel idea in itself. good attempt

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