Monday, 20 February 2012

The Body Builder - 55 Fiction


"DON'T LET ANYTHING, EVEN DEATH STOP YOU FROM DOING WHAT YOU LIKE."
His father had said that.
Body building was Jack's passion. It was like breathing for him. He picked up his usual weights and started to exercise. He looked at the crashed smith machine and that fateful event that had cost him his life."
 


You can curse me for wasting your time if you want. :P
This was my first attempt at 55 words fiction.
In fact it was just a thought that occurred when I was as usual sitting idle and pretending to exercise at gym today morning. A well built guy walked in and was exercising in front. Looking at him and his passion for body building I couldn't help but think of this weird story about how nothing, even death can stop him from pursuing his passion. :P

15 comments:

  1. Nice story. Interesting concept of 55 words. rolls imagination

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  2. Awesome buddy :)
    really a rocking theme !
    keep going

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  3. A innovative and a interesting short fiction story. Keep up your good work Vinay.

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    1. It was an ok story, with your skills, you can do better. :-) I mean bodybuilding? Seriously?

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    2. Thanks for saying that, Abhyudaya Shrivastava. I hope next time the story would be mature and better for you.
      you can check out my other ones too and give review about it.

      http://insanemoviegeek.blogspot.in/search/label/short%20stories

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  4. Interesting story in just 55 words. Wonder how you could manage this!

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    1. Thank you, Sir. I am glad you liked it, it means a lot to me. :) :)

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  5. 55 words and a story. hmmm quite a novel idea in itself. good attempt

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